Marvin Sordell

The third and final part is now online here: http://polymaas.com/2015/11/09/marvin-sordell-no-regrets/

It's a long read, but hopefully worth it.

Thanks to everyone who has read them so far, I really appreciate the kind words as well.

 

Great read Kieran - Great work

 

All three pieces were an enjoyable read well done mate .

 

Top stuff mate! :sign15:

 

Good read!

In terms of constructive criticism, the double spacing between paragraphs makes the gaps a bit too wide. My suggestion would be to use single line spacing; I think it would look better and be easier to read.

 

Do you know what, I've always thought the same myself. It goes like that when I copy and paste from where I originally write the articles. I've just gone through and changed it all now and it does look better. Thanks.

Also, thank you to everyone who's read it so far. Appreciate all the comments too.