Indeed, very good. I can usually pick out inaccuracies in that kind of thing, but you've covered it all really well and accurately too.
"Born in Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, Grant is a Watford fan, and dreamed of playing for the club as a child" he never played for us though
Grant and Lee came through the ranks together and Grant was poached when he was 16ish. I'd have Grant over Lee but I'd have Loach over both of them!.